“Kansas teen uses 3-D printer to make hand for boy”
Williams, Mara’ Rosa. Kansas teen uses 3-D printer to make hand for boy. The Wichita Eagle. 31 Jan. 2014. Web. 24 Feb. 2014. <http://www.kansas.com/2014/01/31/3261314/kansas-teen-uses-3-d-printer-to.html>
Two months ago a six-teen year old junior at Louisburg High School named Mason Wilde changed a nine year old third graders life; Matthew. Matthew was borned with limb difference meaning that he was born with only a thumb and few partial parts on his right hand. Mason was at th e Johnson County Library and made Matthew a hand using a 3D printer. This has changed Matthew’s life. Matthews adopted mother’s father had the same condition except it was on his left hand.
This related to what we were talking about in business. A sixteen year old male made an app to get people informed with the news in the world without having to read two or three pages; this kid changed lots of people’s lives. This reminds me of Mason because he changed Matthews life.
I feel that it is wonderful that Mason made a hand for Matthew with a 3D printer. I feel this way because if I put myself in Matthew’s shoes then I would want someone to do the same thing for me. This event affects me by knowing that their is something for kids that has limb difference.
The impact of using quotations is to get the persons words exactly how they said it. By doing this the author of the story can not make what a person said mean something different. That is the use of quotations.
Evidence: “I remember my dad telling me once that his mother had always wanted him to have fingers,” Jennifer said. Also “Every day, kids were asking him, ‘What happened to your hand, what happened to your hand,’ and I noticed it was wrecking his spirit,” Jennifer said.
Sleezer, John. “The Kansas City Star.” Kansas. 31 Jan. 2014. Media. 24 Feb. 2014.
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I really liked you post because it was very inspiring. I agree, it was a very wonderful thing what Mason did for the little boy.Just remember to check over your grammar. I also noticed some spelling errors and run-ons. Always read your post at least one time before posting it to make sure it all sounds right. Your citations also seem to have a couple of errors. Overall, I really liked your post.
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