The topic of the article is: Apple is planning on making new curved screens.
The article is mainly about Apple planning on making 4.7 and 5.5 inch downward curved screens. According to Prakash “The new phone would likely be released in the third quarter of next year.” The curved glass screen has became a smartphone trend for all the major companies.
I feel that the new curved screens are a good idea but I also think that it is really useless. I think that it is a good idea because who wouldn’t want a screen that is curved to show all of there friends. I also think that it is useless because I really don’t care about the way my screen is shaped on my phone because as long as I got a good phone and my screen is not scratched up I am fine. The curved screen does not really affect me at all. That is how I feel about the new curved screen.
I think that it impacts the world in two different ways. The first way is the people who want to look cool actually need the new curved screen to show how good they are. Also sometimes if you are part of a major business then they sometime require you to have the latest phone. The other way that it can impact the world is some people are very clumsy and them having a curved screen is an accident waiting to happen. That is how I feel the new curved screen will impact the world.
Prakash,Neha. Apple Reportedly Developing curved iPhone Screens. Mashable. 2013. Web. 11 Nov. 2013. <http://mashable.com/2013/11/10/apple-curved-iphone-screens/>
I think that it's not really necessary to make this. I would much rather prefer phones the way they are. I like that you have a lot of good information here. Maybe you could make your sentences a bit shorter. They are kind of hard to read at times, but overall I really like this.
ReplyDeleteI agree that it is kind of pointless to have a phone that's curved when a flat straight phone is just as great. Your blog is really nice to read and I feel as if it's easy to understand and learn. One thing I would suggest is not to have a sentence at the end saying what you just wrote about affects you or the world. It makes it sound weird. Other than that it was a really good blog!
ReplyDeleteThis is very informative. I did not know that they were coming out with a new curved screen. I agree that this is a silly idea though. They need to come out with a screen that is shatter proof. Make sure when your using the word there (their) you use it in the correct form. You put "to show all of there friends" and you should have put "to show all of their friends" because it shows that they belong to them. Great post.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much and next time I will rembemer to put the correct form.
DeleteI honestly do not like the apple phones. I am an android girl. I agree with you, I don't really care about how my screen is shaped either. However I agree with you. People would want the phone to show it off and for bushiness people to look professional.
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